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Monday, March 18, 2013

Sleeping in a Tent

When I was sleeping in my tent it was uncomfortable because there were stones underneath my tent. Suddenly I never knew were my tent was so Mrs Garden told me. Excitedly I ran to the hall to get my bags then I went off to my tent. I was curious because I wanted to know who I was sleeping with. I looked at my tent and I was sleeping with Zion and Taniela.
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  1. Mr Chris MarksMarch 21, 2013 at 8:22 PM

    Really happy to see you adding detail to your first sentence Sebastian. Great words used like curious and excitedly.

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