This is a record of my learning at Point England School in Auckland, NZ.
Hey Sebastian, its Arizona here. This looks pretty cool, makes me want to create an account now with the easy instructions that you have made! There are some parts in the slides where you spell "u" instead of "you" or have used "you're" instead of "your" but we can easily fix these things. Such a cool Google slide though! Well done,Arizona
Hey Sebastian, I'm Noah.I love fantasy games like this one. You made the registration process seem very easy and user friendly. As a fan of these games, I believe anyone new will have an easier time understanding what to do with the help of your slideshow. You've done a good job on this, you just have a few errors. Instead of saying "my person", it would be more suitable if you said "my character" or "the character". Also when you have "My person is Mage", I don't know if you forgot to a an "a" between is and Mage, but these things can always be fixed with some proof reading. Your idea is good and the slide, as I said before, definitely helpful!Keep up the good work, you'll only get better,Noah
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